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singapore american school ­ grade 5 proficient personal narratives turning watermelon stories into seed stories mrs clayton s rockin writers oct 2011

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andrew october 19 2011 riding space mountain at disneyland hong kong

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the dark light enveloped us as we got into line as i saw the long line of people i knew i had a made a good choice i saw the stylish carts rushing in and out of the absolute darkness i thought to myself this will be one of my best experiences in disneyland.

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i was very nervous as i got to the front of the line i felt as if my body was falling into ten billion pieces i was frightened when i took my seat in the cart as my first time riding a rollercoaster i never thought of what i would expect.

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as the ride started the special effects were all around us they showed planets stars and more space related stuff it was really dark but the special effects gave me enough light to see what was going on.

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the cart gained lightning speed as it descended the scary part was that you couldn t see the tracks you never knew what would be coming next because of that i regretted that i chose to ride this rollercoaster and i was right.

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the cart went unbelievably fast as it sped across the rollercoaster track at some points it ascended really high and at some points it descended really low sharp turns made the people scream like crazy special effects that made the people say `ooh

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even though i thought the ride was scary i really liked the speed of the rollercoaster ride the cool wind was blowing on my face as the cart went around.

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i was having fun riding it when the camera showed up i saw a ladder beside it and i was afraid that my head was going to bump into it so to avoid getting my head hurt i ducked under the ladder.

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the ride ended and we went out the exit to see our pictures i was as dizzy as if i was spinning 100 times nonstop the ride made me feel nauseous i

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i was looking on the screen for our picture and when i saw it i wasn t a single bit happy about it it turns out that my face completely ducked away from the camera then my dad told me you shouldn t have ducked under the ladder it was very high up so you wouldn t have hit the ladder with your head even if you were sitting normally in your seat

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however besides from the photo incident the rollercoaster was definitely one of my favorites and i loved the special effects it was one of my best experiences in disneyland.

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and yet today when i ride the rollercoaster i still duck from that ladder because i m getting taller and taller.

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if the people who read this seed wonder when this happened this happened in the summer of 2007 in hong kong when i was still 6 years old.

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